Score: 8

"Amazing!"

submission: Fate of the Faye

date: August 2, 2008

Strong Points:-Smooth flow
-Great graphics
-Great dialog
Weak Points:-(None)

Overall:Great stuff!I enjoyed every second of it.I enjoy flash with a story behind it.The backgrounds were detailed and colorful my eyes were glued to the screen.The music complimented the flash.All around great flash I'm impressed cant wait to see more!

Score: 4

"Decent..."

submission: emo story

date: August 2, 2008

Strong Points:-Humorous
-Interesting concept
-Good music selection for the game
Weak Points:-Lacks originality(to many emo games)
-A lot of glitches(get stuck often)
-You can beat the hole game by clicking that red button

Overall:-Nice try!Lacks originality...The music was ok and so was the concept but there are way to many glitches(I get stuck in walls all the time and when you move on to a new part your character is facing the wrong way!)you have to fix those!I really think you should try and continue working on the hobo character you have it requires much more talent then an emo platform game.Ofcoarse this is my advice do as you please i just want to see you at full potential you know!Anyway keep up the great work!

Score: 8

"OH MAN!!! CLASSIC!!!"

submission: That's What She Said

date: August 1, 2008

Strong Points:-Great sense of humor
-Great character animation
-Great surroundings a lot of detail(backgrounds,objects,exc.)
Weak Points:-(none)

Overall:Great Flash!Way to bring back the classics funny stuff!I truly think you should keep those two characters and make more of these style flashes you'll go far with them anyways thats what i think just trying to help you know!I love your style dont change!

Score: 7

"Cute!"

submission: Jump for Joy

date: August 1, 2008

Strong Points:-Great music
-Great character ideas(simple but cute)
-Humorous
Weak Points:-Sound effects timing was slightly off from time to time

Overall:-Cute i enjoyed it a lot!It made me smile!It was great kept me off my seat the only I saw was that the timing was slightly off but that doesn't matter!I think you could make numerous sketches with simple characters like this.Id really like to see more of this style!Keep up the great work!

Score: 3

"Not bad i have a feeling you'll get a lot better!"

submission: Ninja vs Pirate

date: August 1, 2008

Strong Points:-Great imagination(original i mean a pirate and a ninja best of both worlds lol)
Weak Points:-No background
-No colors
-No sound effects or music
-No plot or story

Overall:-Not a bad start!You got two interesting characters don't give up on them with a live background some color a couple of sounds hear and there and a reason as to why they hate each other and you got yourself one hell of a flash!Keep up the work!Cant wait to see what you come up with next!

Score: 8

"Hilarious!"

submission: I Can Break These Cuffs

date: August 1, 2008

Strong Points:-Humorous(funny,gets your mind off things)
-Great character animation(the charcters looked alike)
- Great sound effects and song(at the end)
Weak Points:-It was a little short(the animation itself)

Overall:-Great stuff!I had a great laugh!Im defiantly going to have to share this with all my friends!It was a little short but thats ok.I love your sense of humor don't change!Great work cant wait to see moreof what you can do!

Score: 4

"Great Stuff!"

submission: PokeyMans Episode 1

date: August 1, 2008

Strong Points:-Good timing(gives the viewer time to read and understand)
-Great dialog
-Good music selection
-Some what funny(has its funny parts)
Weak Points:-Slightly choppy
-Lacks a story or plot

Overall:-Not bad at all i enjoyed it!Its a little choppy and the screen shakes sometimes(don't know if its my comp. or the flash itself).But besides that it was ok.Try being a bit more original there are to many Pokemon flashes going around these days.I'm just saying i think you could do better if you made your own character instead of sprites its much more respectable.I love your work though cant wait to see what you come up with next!

Score: 6

"Funny but the animation could be a lot better!"

submission: DBZ is Gay ! - Mutoniatus

date: August 1, 2008

Strong Points:-Funny(great sense of humor)
-Great voice acting
-Good character imitation
Weak Points:-A little choppy
-Not very detailed(quickly done)
-Backgrounds could be much better

Overall:-Really funny stuff!I love what you do and i love your sense of humor!I just find your work a little bit to sketchy take your time add detail and you be a great flash artist.I'm not judging you just trying to give you positive criticism.I love your work cant wait to see more!

Score: 8

"Amazing!!!"

submission: Final Fantasy:FoH ep1 pt1

date: August 1, 2008

Strong Points:-Great graphics
-Great storyline
-Excellent voice acting
Weak Points:-A little choppy

Overall:-Great stuff!Really good storyline easy to follow and great voice acting!I'm officially your biggest fan!It was a little choppy at parts though but thats fine!Keep up the great work you got a great series ahead of you!

Score: 8

"Its Super Man! Its a Plain! Its Muscle Bird!"

submission: Muscle Bird

date: August 1, 2008

Strong Points:-Humorous(gets you mind off things)
-Amazing graphics!
-Great voice acting
Weak Points:-(None)

Overall:-Love it!Just love it!You have a great sense of humor and great artistic skill!Your original and professional!Nothing could have been done better though my eyes.The worst part was when it ended.Keep up the great work!